I am a daring person
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I have been a daring person all my life. I have dared many things. Some of those things have worked for me and in many others I have fayado. I have fallen many times in the attempt, but many times, and with the help of my heavenly Father, YHVH God, I have risen, to try again, to dare again.
Many times I have dared to write, and I have written prose and poetry, I have written essays and verses, I have written poems. And I wrote about life, creation, friends and friendship, women and the love one feels for them. I also wrote about God and His Word contained in the Bible.
Today I want to write more to YHVH God than to other matters. I want to write to serve him, honor him, testify of him, of his intentions and will, of his love and kindness.
With these lines I share one of those poems that I once wrote inspired by the love of women, sensual love. It is titled "I love you because yes"
I love you because yes
To love you
I do not need your presence
my love for you grows in your absence
To love you
I do not need to see you
my love becomes great
with the impossibility of having you
To love you
I do not need kisses from your mouth
or the caresses of your hands
nor the light of your gaze
or the candor of your smile
I do not need what I like about you
To love you
your existence is enough
I love you because you exist
because you are here in my being
because you are in me
I love you despite the distance
that separates our bodies
I love you in any circumstance
Thank you for existing
But to live
so that my happiness is complete
I have to admit
I need you every day
Many times I have dared to write, and I have written prose and poetry, I have written essays and verses, I have written poems. And I wrote about life, creation, friends and friendship, women and the love one feels for them. I also wrote about God and His Word contained in the Bible.
Today I want to write more to YHVH God than to other matters. I want to write to serve him, honor him, testify of him, of his intentions and will, of his love and kindness.
With these lines I share one of those poems that I once wrote inspired by the love of women, sensual love. It is titled "I love you because yes"
I love you because yes
To love you
I do not need your presence
my love for you grows in your absence
To love you
I do not need to see you
my love becomes great
with the impossibility of having you
To love you
I do not need kisses from your mouth
or the caresses of your hands
nor the light of your gaze
or the candor of your smile
I do not need what I like about you
To love you
your existence is enough
I love you because you exist
because you are here in my being
because you are in me
I love you despite the distance
that separates our bodies
I love you in any circumstance
Thank you for existing
But to live
so that my happiness is complete
I have to admit
I need you every day
frenchqueen › Me too!
maca1 › Great artikle
soncee › Beautiful artikle friend
indexer › Can I just point out that "daring" in an adjective and not a noun (except when the word is used in a purely abstract sense)? You can be "a daring person" but not "a daring". I mention this simply to help you with a point of English, and not as a criticism.
As an example of daring (yes - a noun, but technically this is a "verbal noun"), writing poetry in a language that is not your own is a very good example! This poem is not beyond criticism - taken purely as a poem - but it is a lot better than a lot of the so-called poems that turn up on this site!
As an example of daring (yes - a noun, but technically this is a "verbal noun"), writing poetry in a language that is not your own is a very good example! This poem is not beyond criticism - taken purely as a poem - but it is a lot better than a lot of the so-called poems that turn up on this site!
indexer › I forgot to point out that a person who dares is a darer, not a daring.
